** Editorials have specific
grammatical features. You will identify
some important and frequently used grammatical features in the article
below. The use of these grammatical features will help you create your
own editorial later on in the writing portion.
Please
read the article again a second time. This time, you will notice some
of the text has been highlighted. While reading, pay attention to the
words that are highlighted. This will help you become more aware
of certain grammatical features that occur in editorials. When you are
finished reading the editorial, please answer the questions below.
7.5
Million Kids on Facebook Are at Risk
By John Brandon
Published May
10, 2011
FoxNews.com
As many as 7.5 million kids
under the age
of 13 are using Facebook,
despite
the company's official prohibition.
5 million children are under the age of 10. For minors who
lack the experience or judgment to
use a social network, this
raises the scary potential of sexual predators
tracking down kids who reveal their age in
an online chat, cyberbullying
and
more, according to a new survey
released Tuesday by Consumer Reports. “A
million kids were bullied on Facebook in the last year," Jeff Fox,
technology editor at
Consumer Reports,
told FoxNews.com. "A 10-year-old is
not well-equipped
to deal with those things.”
Fox said
Facebook recognizes that kids should not
use the service and prohibits access to
those under 13. “But the age
verification system is
weak,”
he said, “It’s too easy
to lie about your age.”
Facebook could instead use existing
age verification
services such as Privo or
a parent could first prove their age using credit card
verification and then
vouch
for the child’s age, he suggested.
Facebook
declined to comment specifically to
FoxNews.com about the Consumer
Reports survey, but did release an official
statement
about
the Consumer Reports survey. "Recent
reports have highlighted just how difficult
it is to
implement age
restrictions
on the Internet and that there is no single
solution
to
ensuring
younger children don’t circumvent a
system or lie about their age," the
statement reads. "We appreciate the attention that these reports and other
experts
are giving this matter and believe this will provide an opportunity
for
parents, teachers, safety advocates and
Internet services to focus on this
area, with the ultimate goal of keeping young
people of
all ages safe online.”
Child safety
is but one aspect of a complex
problem.
The Consumer Reports survey found that as many as 5 million computers
in U.S. households were
exposed to a virus. There's another
twist: The Children's
Online Privacy Protection Act (COPPA) makes it illegal
to
collect information about
kids using an Internet service, said Ross Ellis,
the
founder
of the child-advocacy group Love Our Children USA. In 2006, the
FTC
fined popular
blogging site
Xanga.com $1 million for collecting information about
minors. The COPPA
guidelines are strict,
Ellis said, with plenty of paperwork to sign for a parent
to approve a child’s access, and most sites just restrict access
altogether.
Cyberbullying
is
yet another problem: Younger kids
aren't as emotionally developed to deal with adults and teens who make
hurtful
comments.
“Everything from hurt feelings
to emotional abuse,
isolation,
depression and humiliation
can result from posts on
Facebook,” said Tom Jacobs,
a retired
juvenile
judge.
Consultant John
Bambenek told FoxNews.com that the
“nightmare scenario”
is not for kids to flirt online or engage
in instant
message chat with strangers—but simply posting pictures. Predators
can download
the images
and determine the child’s exact location using embedded
GPS
data.
Of course, these
concerns should be taken in
context: The survey focused on the 7.5 million kids using
Facebook, but that’s
a small
percentage of the 500 million users
worldwide. Social media expert Dr.
Marcella Wilson of Wilson Consulting told FoxNews.com that parents
should
better monitor their child’s Internet access overall. She advises
creating a
contract
between
parent and child about how the Internet will be used. Bob
Gaines, a consultant
with security firm AllCovered.com, said parents and kids
should follow basic Facebook rules. Do
not state your location or saying
you are home alone; in your profile, do not tell your exact age; and of
course, make sure you know your child’s username and password.
But in the end,
Facebook
needs to address the
problem, said Denise
Tayloe, the founder
of Privo. “Magically, everyone using
these services is over 13,” she said—hinting that something is clearly
wrong.
Let's look at some of the most
common grammatical features found in an editorial!
Look at the words
highlighted in yellow.
What part of speech are they (e.g., nouns, verbs)?
What are
nouns?
Answer: person (or animal), place, thing, or idea |
Look at the words highlighted in green.
What part of speech are they (e.g., nouns, adjectives, verbs)?
Adjectives can be used in two different ways. In this particular
editorial, are most of the adjectives used before the noun or after the
noun?
Look at the words highlighted in pink.
What part of speech are they?
What is the function of a prepositional phrase?
Answer: gives a location to where something is; adds information to the noun |
In
a few of the lines of the editorial, we see something different from
the way the article is written. We see the use of quotation marks ("
").
"A
million kids were bullied on
Facebook in the last year," Jeff Fox, technology editor at Consumer
Reports, told FoxNews.com. "A ten-year old in not well-equipped to deal
with those things."
"Everything
from hurt
feelings to emotional abuse, isolation, depression and humiliation can
result from posts on Facebook," said Tom Jacobs.
Why would an
editorial contain quotation marks?
Answer: so the editor can support their opinion and make their argument stronger |